Searching_mysteries

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Mswhite0106

Akka i have some suggestions for the tittle of agathiyan and thulir's middle aged couple love story..... Unagaluku pidichuchu na idhula onnu use pannunga illati on prblm naan ippo thaan unga announcement parthen... 
          
          # happily here
          # years of us
          # today & forever
          # Anbudan
          # Iruvarai ondru
          
          Avlothaan akka.... 
          ♥♥♥
          
          Ippo vachu irukarudheyy super ahh irukku butt idhulaam sollanum nu thonuchuu

Mswhite0106

@Halcyon_g aprom 2nd name superr ahh irukku
Balas

Mswhite0106

@Halcyon_g  ohhhhh naan pakala nu nenikuren akka.... 
            
            Manichoo
            
            Aprom
            
            Happiiee diwali akkaa
            
            May this Diwali light up your life with success, good health, and wonderful moments to cherish.....
Balas

Halcyon_g

@Mswhite0106 I had other names too 
            
            I actually confused with 
            
            Naaraigalum sirikirathe 
            
            Kalangal ointha pinbum kadhal... 
            
            
            Athuku thani translation potu kolapanum nu tha romba simple title potein maa and I already asked about this title suggestions.... I liked many titles suggested but elam Tamil la tha irunchu and simple ah ila.... That's why I went with it.... Atha tha author's note laiyum potrupein
Balas

Searching_mysteries

Thinking of making Theeni much simple one 
          
          
          
          Like without much complexity in characters to make it relevant there in kindle for new readers 
          
          Shiva and Gowri 
          
          Their child 
          
          Aadhiran and Uyir 
          
          Adhiran and Innisai have 2 sons 
          
          Elder one Agathiyan, younger one as well as adopted Aadhavan 
          
          
          
          Jai shankar and Devaki 
          
          They have only Jayadev 
          
          Jayadev and Uyir have 
          
          Thulir 
          
          Thalir and Thuyavan 
          
          
          There is not going to be much complexities nor any references from previous generations will be there..... So making it more simple and relevant
          
          
          Let's reduce the wealth too.... 
          
          Shiva's family have only hospital chains which is now  handled by Aadhiran and will pass down to Aadhavan as Agathiyan choose police profession... 
          
          Jaishankar have Dev industries which is now handled by Jayadev...... Which will pass down to Thalir and Thuyavan 
          
          
          
          
          There is not a sibling relationship between Shiva and Devaki.... 
          
          They just binded by the marriage of Uyir and Jayadev... 
          
          
          Keeping more character will confuse the new readers that's why..... 
          
          
          What do you think???

shineefelix

@Searching_mysteries yea that makes less confusing for the kindle readers and it will give different version for the wattpad readers reading the kindke version too❤️❤️❤️❤️
Balas

Mswhite0106

@Halcyon_g ohhhhhkkkayyyy boss
Balas

Halcyon_g

@Mswhite0106 I didn't mention about family dynamics yet apart from Uyir and Jayadev
Balas