Serenity47

@RoterraJones yeah well that was me first story and I was very yiung when I wrote it, and I haven't gotten to edit it, but actually,  my newest story is nothing like my first one. 

RoterraJones

You should read over your stories before posting them there are so many name mix ups that it hard to follow. You seem to have some good ideas, but your stories were to confushing that i counld not finish and stopped on the 3rd page. Have a friend proof read it to help. Good luck