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@Fraz92 : Lol, thanks. I'm going to read more of your stories later on today. They all seem interesting.
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Thanks for following us! :)
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@Fraz92 : I read your review and I want to thank you for being honest. :) Not bad for 16 year old right? Lol xD Thanks for reading it.
the_pluviophile
Hello. THANKS for following me. But i hope that means you're liking my story. But if not i hope you have time to drop by :)
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Hey! I've read your work "Last Resort" and liked it too... My review of your work will come out in this month's @United_Monthly_Mag... Keep up the good work! :)
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@LadyHarlequin : I can take it lol. Thanks a bunch.
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@LadyHarlequin : That would be great actually. Thank you!
LadyHarlequin
Well, I have two critics for you.
@SomewhatDistracted comes highly recommended. I follow her and she's the real deal.
@dreamybanana actually critiqued my work once. You could see if she's active at the moment. Good critic.
Ask at your own risk, though. They tell you like it is. See their profiles for more info.
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@LadyHarlequin : Okay! I did take that advice and work on it in my new story. Whenever you get a chance, would you mind reading over it to see if I improved? Your critique is greatly appreciated. :)
LadyHarlequin
I'll take a look soon. I'm actually neck-deep in the editing process myself and have yet to master the art of multi-tasking, but I'll get to it. I could even recommend a critic/editor if you like.
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@LadyHarlequin : Sorry about that! I didn't see it. And yes, I love your story. It's exactly what I'm working to make my stories like. A lot of people says that my stories are good, but I lack some connections in my sentences. If that makes any sense... Anyway, great writing! xD
LadyHarlequin
Thank you! It was a pleasant surprise! Remember: characterization is very important. ^_^
LadyHarlequin
I'm flattered Little Treasures made your list. Thank you. ^_^ It's good you're still working on Everlasting. Make sure you hit reply in the comments when you're doing so, though, because I'm not getting your responses.