Hii!! New reader here! Ngl, your stories are pretty good, but I think the way you write it needs a little improvement. Don't get me wrong, I'm just suggesting, I'm not trying to offend anyone. it's just that it's more fun to read when the words and sentences are written clearly. While I was reading kase I'd sometimes get confused and I have to stop to think about what the narrator was trying to say or explain. Sometimes, the sentences feel a bit convoluted, making it hard to grasp the main point. Maybe with a bit more clarity and structure, your Writings could really be more interesting since it'll be polished...But despite it, it can still be processed though, if you'd pay attention at every details. The Ideas are there but they're not always conveyed in the most engaging way. I'm sorry if you'd feel offended, but i just wanted to say my opinion. But your stories are really great, I'll give you my votes! :>