ShipznChipz

So, the new ori game is out and I will eventually post a new chapter. I think I'll do some editing to the old chapter to but I don't know how long it'll be until I finally add another chapter.

Godmod798

@ShipznChipz its been four years,you alive?
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Ohioarmy

@ShipznChipz it been 3 years you still alive
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Dylalmob

@ShipznChipz It's been 2 years, so you going to work on the next chapter or what?
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TankAndtheGang

For everyone who saw those notifs and thought "wtf?" This is my new account. And I'm so sorry to say this, but Ori is the last thing on my mind. I still love the game, the franchise, everything. I still want to make the story as well, but it pains me to say that the views I had back then have changed. I have new ideas I wanna work on and a whole other book I'm working on. So I deeply apologize. If you are so bold, I will allow my book to be public so those interested in the story could continue it. I can even give you notes on how the story is supposed to go.

ShipznChipz

So, the new ori game is out and I will eventually post a new chapter. I think I'll do some editing to the old chapter to but I don't know how long it'll be until I finally add another chapter.

Godmod798

@ShipznChipz its been four years,you alive?
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Ohioarmy

@ShipznChipz it been 3 years you still alive
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Dylalmob

@ShipznChipz It's been 2 years, so you going to work on the next chapter or what?
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CaseDescarazo

...understandable. My intentionally generic title and chosen trope does have the reputation of being low-quality. 
          
          That said, thx for adding my story and (kinda?) giving it a chance.

ShipznChipz

@CaseDescarazo YES PLEASD I NEED MORE CRITISISM ON MY WORK PLEASE!!! I do not care how blunt it is, I consider my self an amature too.
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CaseDescarazo

@ShipznChipz I’ll decline your offer and instead propose my own. How about this, I read your works and tell you what I think, and for payment, you can do absolutely nothing. Just sit back and wait for the comments to flood in. As a condition, I will spare no holds barred. Everything will be honest and blunt with praise given where it’s needed. But don’t dwell on what I say too much. I am still an amateur writer with opinions, so take it with a massive grain of salt.
            
            So, deal?
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