Sierra1D

@noorthemonkey hey just did your shout out! Would love it if you gave me some feedback on my story ;)

NishaG

@Sierra1D omg thank you soooo much for the advice. I'm definitely realizing that I'm loosing her so I'm going to try to bring it back to her and her feelings. Also, that's a really good idea! :) Definitely will check out your book (which one?) when I have the time. Unfortunately, that'll have to be this weekend or later because I have an infinite amount of homework piling up to be completed on the weekend -.- btw, want to do a follow for a follow?

Sierra1D

@NishaG hey I saw an read your story, it's really great. I forgot to reply after I read it. My biggest advice is, update! ;) But have the guy (totally spacing on names) make the girl forget all her sorrows when she's with him or something truly special. And I think you might be starting to loose your character, it happens a lot in a lot of stories so remember who she is and keep her in that light! That's all. I'd love feedback also if you wouldn't mind. Thanks!