17 and still writing could use advice and some constructive critisim. i know my works were pretty cliche and i ramble a lot but give it a chance the premise is about the same hopeful i can improve farther than what my works picture me know curantly working on something big so hold on tight because i'm just getting started.
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Feb 17, 2015 01:46AM
sorry if i keep updating bleadcolt i forgot to proof read many of my chapters and fix my errors while i was updating i decided to change the story a bit i think it might make more sense sorry b...View all Conversations
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