DekaMivy
u should read my Dotaru's Fool poem and criticize that if it has any bad grammer
Sir_Salamanderius
@DekaMivySTOS Pardon me, I don't intend to offend in my critique on your friend's story, so if you were offended, then I dearly apologize. I just want to help an aspiring writer make his story something great. Plus, your friend knows me well enough. I'm one of his friends, too. The crazy one.