@Smashing_Cosmos I just looked up your profile owing to your comments on my THE VISITOR.
It is sad no one replied to your question above after more than eighteen months.
I haven't looked at your book, but I do know that if you don't have the desire to finish it for yourself (sod the readers), then there is no point in continuing, but if you really want to write a story then just ignore the people who are going to read it.
Just do your best, re-read and re-read and edit and re-read and if people like it they do, if they don't, well, that's up to them - don't let it faze you.
I'm curious, so will have a read of it.
Glad you're enjoying THE VISITOR.