SmokinSapphire

Had some problems so had to pawn laptop, but I still have my phone. I just can't edit much from phone so I will add chapters as planned :)

jkjamesbooks

Hi, @SmokinSapphire! Thank you for adding Front Burner to your reading list. I hope you'll enjoy it!
          
          Good luck on the "was" issue! Without seeing the paragraph, I don't have a clean-cut replacement. When I run into that, I try to focus on an actionable verb or rephrase the sentence entirely to change it up.

SmokinSapphire

I plan to get some reading done today so I will be back by your profile :) Thank you, I have had to do that with a few sentences to get that word "was" out of there.
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SmokinSapphire

I have been editing for over two hours now and I have been seeing a pattern with the word 'was' I don't know why, but I have at least 4 in the same paragraph. 
          Does anyone know what else I could use to get away from the word 'was'? 
          Thank you in advance for any help

SmokinSapphire

Looks like It is going to be another long day of editing and revising, I came across someone's profile yesterday and they had this link where you can paste your work and it will tell you what is wrong or what not. I didn't pay for the version so it is not everything that I need to know, but just with the free version I have seen a few spots where it still doesn't read right.
          I didn't even know what a sticky sentence was but I do now and will be rewriting that whole sentence :)

SmokinSapphire

I thought I would let you all know that I am still working on Fatal Heart, but that is something new for me so it is taking me longer to get it together. I am doing great with Loving The Boss, I have chapters that I want to add now, but I will try to wait :)
          When would you like to see updates?

SmokinSapphire

I think I have found the female character for Loving The Boss, I am having a harder time finding the perfect guy for this story. This is the fun part though huh :)
          I will be asking for you opinions as soon as I add a few more chapters for you to read, I hope these two stories are coming out right.

SmokinSapphire

There are a start of two books on my profile if anyone would like to read them. They are just the start of them, but I will update once a week in less I have a great week and able to upload twice in one week.
          I hope that I get to hear from you soon, have a great day all :)