A brutally honest critique would help a lot. :)
Anywaaaaaaaaaays, Of course I'll return the favor. But I'll be reading yours tonight. :D
I have school.. :(
Thank you so much. :D
@Asdfghjklsaab Sure thing! Do you want a thorough and brutally honest critique? And could you return the favour and read chapter one of my story? It doesn't have to be too long, just something to let me know you've read it. :)