SoarerMillie

Hey everyone, my readers of Books with Bullets, if you’ve noticed I have been struggling to upload chapters. Now before you all start thinking im going to leave it and discontinue it, that’s not what’s happening! Not in a million years! I absolutely love Jason and his character so it’s not being discontinued. However I recently started college so I won’t have as much time to write the next chapters, I have a lot of ideas and wrote them all out, they just need to be put in the story. So im just telling you all uploads are definitely going to be slower, I have the next chapter mid-written so expect it soon. I’m so sorry to bring this news but please understand where I’m coming from with this. Love you all my readers!!

SoarerMillie

Hey everyone, my readers of Books with Bullets, if you’ve noticed I have been struggling to upload chapters. Now before you all start thinking im going to leave it and discontinue it, that’s not what’s happening! Not in a million years! I absolutely love Jason and his character so it’s not being discontinued. However I recently started college so I won’t have as much time to write the next chapters, I have a lot of ideas and wrote them all out, they just need to be put in the story. So im just telling you all uploads are definitely going to be slower, I have the next chapter mid-written so expect it soon. I’m so sorry to bring this news but please understand where I’m coming from with this. Love you all my readers!!

SoarerMillie

Guess who’s backkk!!!
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          ME!
          
          So let’s start with why I haven’t updated in like two months until last week. I was working on fuel enrollment credits and im also graduating soon! Let’s go class of 2025! Anyways now that I’m done with work I have more time in my hands and not as busy so I’m back into writing. That was the primary reason of why, but I’ve also been inactive because the times I wasn’t busy with work I would TRY to write but I was stuck on one part in writing and that was the movie parts. Because it’s not available on hbo max anymore- don’t know why, now i have to look to YouTube for clips on certain parts. But yeah I would get lazy searching for parts and tell myself I’ll do it later and forget to do it. But yeah that’s the overall reasons of why I wasn’t writing but fear not! I’m back and ready to continue writing!

SoarerMillie

Really??? Please send me the link, it would be greatly appreciated! 
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raven121_u

@SoarerMillie there's an animated website where u can watch red hood YKnow I can give u the link
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SoarerMillie

Hey everyone just found new motivation to write today and let’s keep it short, I’ve finished three chapters. However you know I only publish on Saturdays every two weeks or more. It just depends on when the last one was published. But yeah expect a chapter this Saturday!

raven121_u

This is for all of you! (Not apart of the chain!)
          
          Read it all
          
          We're true friends
          
          We ride together, we die together
          
          Send this to everybody you cars about, including me, if you care
          
          See how many times you get this
          
          I want you to know you're an amazing friend, till death and forever
          
          If I don't get this back, I understand
          
          But I have a game for you
          
          Once you read this, you must send this to 15 people including me
          
          If you get 3 back, you're loved
          
          Nobody knows how important something is until you lose it
          
          Tonight (Right at 12:00 am) the person you love will realize that they love you
          
          Then at 1:00 pm to 2:00 pm, be ready for the shock of your life
          
          If you break this chain you will have bad luck
          
          With love send this to 15 people
          
          If not you'll turn ugly in a year
          
          A friend told me to do this so pass it on
          
          Tomorrow two boys/girls will ask if they can have your number
          
          Send this to 15 people or bad luck starts for a whole year
          
          This is not fake

raven121_u

raven121_u

@raven121_u I see well, thank you
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SoarerMillie

Hey I was just reading it, some mistakes I saw while reading was when you use dialogue with quotation marks. You would put them like “blank” “blank” right next to each other (the ending mark depends if it’s a question or statement) so the correct way would be, “blah blah blah,”
            (A space between)
            “Blah blah blah,”
            
            That way the readers don’t get confused who’s talking. The other thing is on chapter 6 which is where I’m at, the conversation between redhood and the investigator vigilante it tends to get confusing on who’s speaking so what I also suggest is after quotations place the details of the person speaking next to it and after put the details of what the other person might be thinking if they are.
            
            Example:
            
            She opened her mouth to speak, but he beat her to it. “You don’t need to explain yourself to me, I already know.” He spoke with a kind smile on his face.
            
            “T-thank y-you…” Her eyes began to tear up as she choked on her words.
            
            Example ended
            
            So basically a new line for each new dialogue line but always add detail of who is speaking. But let’s say they’re about to say something dramatic like “I’m pregnant” then only quotation marks so it leaves a lasting impression on readers. 
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raven121_u

Could you read it and let me know what mistakes I made?
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raven121_u

I need help with my Red Hood fanfic and I'm worried that it will be bad

SoarerMillie

Yes!! Okay so what I recommend doing is making an order of how these events are going to happen and then add details like dialogue and description.
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raven121_u

I want to try to create it so...will you help me? 
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SoarerMillie

Hey I have several draft stories ready to be published, but before publishing any I want ti give the audience I chance to choose which to be published first.
          
          Options:
          
          •Military Love Story
          
          •Vampire Princess Love Story
          
          •Redhood Love story
          
          Here are the brief topics if the stories I wish to publish.

SoarerMillie

@SoarerMillie I'm sorry for those who may have chosen a option other than Redhood Love Story, on my page currently I have uploaded the draft I had saved for this story. Thank you for reading this!
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