SonamMalik638

@silent_nejiri Fate is my favorite story; I loved it so much.  I have a little secret: 'Vishnu baby' shared the same name as the person who sat in front of me during my 10th board exams, on whom I had a tiny, tiny crush.    
          
          I’ve read Fate so many times, and every single time, the emotions I felt were new. Since it was my first time reading such an emotional and painful story, I feel deeply attached to it.
          
          ​I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing it, and I'd be so grateful if you continue and complete it! Whether the ending is happy or sad, I will accept both. Every author has the right to decide how their story ends, and you truly write so well. I know that even if you choose a sad ending, it will be exactly what the story needs. All the best to you, Author ji 

SonamMalik638

@silent_nejiri Yes, I remember! Your second story was also very good. Azad and Sarim were twins, and one of them had a low hemoglobin level. He suffered from a condition that made him sensitive to normal temperatures, which is why he always wore full sleeves (I don’t remember the exact details).
          
          I don’t recall the stepbrother's name, but he was quite harsh. He punished both boys severely. He had a misconception that either Azad or Sarim (the older twin) was spoiled, judging him based on his clothes.
          Towards the end, a misunderstanding occurred between the twins. Even though Sarim refused, Azad forced him to go to a party. Because of this, the eldest brother punished them both severely. He even hurt Sarim because he previously believed Sarim was the responsible and sensible one; he hadn't expected this behavior from him. Sarim was deeply hurt by this. The brother separated them, taking Sarim to a room to punish him while Azad cried outside the door, begging for forgiveness. Later, Sarim also blamed Azad and stopped speaking to him for a few days.
          The brother punished Azad further, ordering him to do all the household chores and warning him that any mistake would lead to more punishment. Near the end, something major happened, and the brother made Azad stay outside in the cold all night as punishment (unaware of his medical condition). Azad was already exhausted, and his body was aching from the beatings. Eventually, his body couldn't take it anymore, and he fainted.
          When Sarim found out, he cleared up all the misunderstandings between them and the stepbrother. Azad was hospitalized in critical condition, and only then did the stepbrother realize his mistake and start blaming himself. That’s all I remember..!! 

ivwonx

@SonamMalik638 ohh God I just had a mini happiness attack. I'm sooo happy you enjoy my book do much! ʕ⁠っ⁠•⁠ᴥ⁠•⁠ʔ⁠っ
          
          I am actually having exams so that's why I'm updating slowly, once they get over I will start updating regularly pakka! 
          
          Targets complete nahi hote kabhi kabhi, so I get a little sad and upset 
          
          And Abou negative comments, i always try my best to not let them affect me. But it hurts na when you're creating an art with so much love and handling it like a precious glass and someone comes and says such hurtful words..
          
          That was sooo sweet of you to say. Thank you sooo much ! ❤️✨✨