SongBirdForever

@LiarLiarLiar it's no problem and you're welcome. I had to recommend such a wonderful story and I wish you all the best in your future writing ideas

DawnStarling

Thank you so much for checking out my novel. thanks for the vote too! Please let me know if I answered your question. I think i understand your question though. chapter 2 starts off too...refreshing? I'll have to link chapter 2 better with chapter 1 so that it's clearer.  Please let me know of any more questions you may have. Thanks again!

Ayla--

Hey, please go check out my books. I am having at least 3 new books out by the end of summer. But Right Now I am holding a contest for one of my new books all of the information and rules are one my page. Please check it out I think you have a very good chance of winning because you have an older brother and sister and twin that could help you. IF you win this will give you many more follower and help me out. Please enter. Best of Luck! :) Ayla