Just finished reading Quid pro quo and i have to share my thoughts. If i was challenged to describe this book in three words I would say it was witty, cool and endearing.
As someone who is planning my own novel (might never publish it) I try to keep an eye out for techniques the author is using to get the message across, the style of their writing, what I would change if I was an editor and things of that nature.
While reading this book i truely forgot myself and got swept into the world you built. The characters felt like people, the jokes made me cackle and the climax had me fixed in trance.
I am not sure what I would change about this book because it has such a good balance to it. You wrote about Satchmo's and Edge's past. The build up to the final fight felt earned. Satchmo had a pleasant mix of victories and missteps that made him so real to me.
All in all this is staying in my reading list for life.