@heartdevilxoxo also, I'd like to give my thoughts on the story when I finish it. I'm an avid writer myself and have written a book and am currently working on a long running series. I just like seeing other works and try to improve myself everyday, so I'd be happy to share my perspective on things. I'm not great by any standard but I have an understanding of story writing so I'd like to have a talk about this and such. I'm rambling again, I'll be on my way. Take care and keep up with the work