Squampyisbestship

Why do I have nearly 80 followers? Im trashhhhhhhh. Thank you so much!!!

PirculiarProductions

Hey its me again. Ive been working on my story. Its the joji miller x child reader. Its comeing along great. I was wondering if you could read it? You dont have to but id would mean the world to me if you did. Still working on it though. Also working on another story recently.

Squampyisbestship

It's really good! My advice would be to double space between each paragraph and appeal more to the readers with shorter hair that might not be able to be put in a ponytail. I'd also say to spellcheck/proofread your work, and remember to capitalize I when it's on it's own like "Did I hit a sensitive spot?" rather than "Did i hit a sensitive spot?" since that's how it's supposed to be. Also, be sure to capitalize the first letter of the names of the characters like Joji would be Joji not joji, and Max would be Max not max, and so on anc so forth. Hope this helped!
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Squampyisbestship

Of course! Good luck with your other one!
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