DebbAnn

I just finished reading your weekend write-in post for the prompt "friend." Harry is definitely a good friend--I like your description, "...swallowed hot glass," and the title is great--the song is on a continual loop in my head now. :)

StabbiTabbi

@DebbAnn  isn't that what relationship existential dread feels like? Yeah, the song is ridiculously catchy. thank you for the comment. Sure appreciate it.
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SoulRaider116

Omgosh, thanks for adding Dive Bar Oracle to your list. It's my first really original work on here, so I hope you enjoy! 

StabbiTabbi

@SoulRaider116   don't sweat it too much... I understand that now it's more of a good practice guideline than the rule..as it was back in my day... but if you get in the good habit of it.. it does tend to make the reading easier...
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SoulRaider116

@StabbiTabbi 
            Absolutely, I appreciate the feedback. I try to be good about tenses, I guess I overlooked it.
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StabbiTabbi

@SoulRaider116 
            just a quick thing ~ and it's my thing... watch the verb tenses...
            
            if you are writing in the present tense  should reflect that  for example
            he grabbed... versus he grabs... other than that I enjoyed the story...
            thank you
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