Unfortunate

@StarlightGemstone ik they have no drama. there is a reason why. I just got wattpad and I don't write the stories down on paper, I make it up as I go

@StarlightGemstone I gave comments as a reader on how I felt. The premise is interesting but the execution needs work.
            
            Someone might say, "the drama is not there. Everything is just being told."
            
            A little conflict and detour can lengthen the story. Even it gives a reason to invest our interests.

hope u like the tale of the magician 

@StarlightGemstone hey