StarlightGemstone
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hey. I working on the magician story soon. hope u guys like it
StarlightGemstone
@StarlightGemstone ik they have no drama. there is a reason why. I just got wattpad and I don't write the stories down on paper, I make it up as I go
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PyroTank
@StarlightGemstone I gave comments as a reader on how I felt. The premise is interesting but the execution needs work. Someone might say, "the drama is not there. Everything is just being told." A little conflict and detour can lengthen the story. Even it gives a reason to invest our interests.
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StarlightGemstone
hey. I working on the magician story soon. hope u guys like it
StarlightGemstone
@StarlightGemstone ik they have no drama. there is a reason why. I just got wattpad and I don't write the stories down on paper, I make it up as I go
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PyroTank
@StarlightGemstone I gave comments as a reader on how I felt. The premise is interesting but the execution needs work. Someone might say, "the drama is not there. Everything is just being told." A little conflict and detour can lengthen the story. Even it gives a reason to invest our interests.
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StarlightGemstone
I will post part 4 and 5 later https://www.wattpad.com/story/136564199