Lauren

@MargaretKassel Sure, I actually just read it. Also, have more confidence in yourself, the only way to get better with your writing is if you ask other peoples opinion on what they like to read and what you yourself would like to write and then go from there.  

Could you read my short story? It's kinda bad but whatever....
          

@StarxOfxAgesx14 No way u hav a twin!? thats awesome! :D haha i've always wanted a twin. :P

@Lucky_Number_13 Yah, I guess. I have a twin sister and her name starts with an L also. Which is another thing I think is cool. ^-^

@StarxOfxAgesx14 OMFG my name is lauren too isnt it an awesome name? ;)

Thanks for dropping by at my story!!  Hope to update this week!

@xXOnlyAngelsFallxX  
          
          Your welcome Kelsey. And yes, that is a sims character lol. I love to play it but I haven't done much playing lately. I'll also try to read the other story you suggested. I hope you keep making wonderful stories in the future and good luck to you! ^-^