TaintedBloodBooks

Like vampire stories? Well, sink your teeth into this!
          
          'The Not So Secret Life of Helena Callahan'
          
          ^ My story follows a teenage runaway, who sells her body to make a living. And her not so average life is about to get even more bizarre when she meets a guy who gives her a little more then she bargained for. ;-)
          
          -- Emma.

Beautiful_Diaster93

Hey my name is Kyh and I was wondering if you could read my new story called P.S. I hate You. And tell mewhat you think about it. I would really appreciate it, i you like it become a fan, vote, comment, spread the word. If not then thank you or looking at this message. :-) 
          Here's an preview:
          
          Chapter One- Nicole
          
          The sun beamed down on me as it rose this morning. Last night's events flashed through my head, as I became more awake. The way he touched me, caressed me, held me; last night was amazing. The body next to me shifted and rolled over. I turned over and looked at his handsome sleeping face. Strongly defined chin, eyes the color of deep blue, wavy dark brown hair, perfectly pouty lips. This guy was every girls dream, but he isn't mine. Besides his charming good looks, he was and complete and utter asshole. He was inconsiderate, arrogant, cocky, condescending, everything you wouldn't want in a guy, yet every chick wants him! I don't get it. And yet he's lying right next to me. He's my enemy, and I just lost my virginity to him. 
          
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          Two days earlier
          
          I was in AP Biology with my best friend, Jamie. He's been my best friend since we were in diapers. Jamie stood 6'2', athlete's body, square chin, eyes the shade of jade green, the lips of an Greek God. Yep, my best friends hot, but he was so much more to me. He was my big brother, my protector, my hard rock. All the girls have been wanting him since high school started, but he's had his eye on somebody else. That somebody would be my older sister/twin Samone. He's been in love with her for years, but she's never know his true feelings, because he has never gotten the courage to tell her. And every time he does, it always finds a way to backfire. Jamie's also the McGinley High's star quarterback

ann_o_nemos

Could you read my newest story? “I’m Body Guarding the President’s Jerk Son…Who is HOT! FML”. Comment and vote plz!
          
          Carly Dupont is not a normal seventeen-year-old girl. She works for her dad in his freelance organization called COBRA as a bodyguard. She trains hard and shuts everyone out of her world. After her mom’s death years ago, she’s never let anyone else in. 
          
          Her training is complete and her dad sends her off to be the bodyguard to the President’s son. She hasn’t seen him since she was seven, and like any jerk, he used to torment her with petty little tricks. But now she’s back and she’s stronger, faster, better.
          
          Yet he still has the inexplicable ability to make her feel like the weak little girl she used to be. Could he be the one to break her invisible wall?
          
          Welcome to her world of fists, politicians, assassins, high school, and even possible romance.
          

maryasha

lol, don;t worry, i won't make them fall in love fast,, because come on, there no fun in loving that quickly ;p i like it more when there's uncertainty in the story that keeps the plot interesting
          with that sad, i've added --~-- whenever there is a POV change to let readers know a new POV has begun in the new chapter i hope that clears up a bt of misunderstand (thats ch 6 that i just posted :3)
          thx for the advice, i'm trying to implement all the advice and suggestions ppl a re giving me into my story, and i am really grateful for all the help i am getting

maryasha

You make my heart feel jubilant
          You make me feel warm
          You made my day
          Thanks
          
          For being my Fan
          
          --> I know its corny (what can i say, i'm a mushy sort of person --_--"), but knowing that someone liked what i've created makes me feel all those things.
          Hope you like the upcoming chapters, let me know what you think of them 
          
          PS. I just posted chapter 6

maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls
          
          Please read the first two chapters before you decide if you want to continue reading it or not :3