StoryMAFia

The last major revision has been done on chapter 6.  It was originally over 4,000 words.  I managed to cut it down to just over 3,000, but it's still the longest chapter of the six.  Thanks, everyone, for reading and commenting!  Please feel free to continue to do so, so I can make the story even better.

StoryMAFia

The last major revision has been done on chapter 6.  It was originally over 4,000 words.  I managed to cut it down to just over 3,000, but it's still the longest chapter of the six.  Thanks, everyone, for reading and commenting!  Please feel free to continue to do so, so I can make the story even better.

StoryMAFia

I've completely re-worked chapter 1 of Just Go With It, based on feedback I've received.  If anyone could please (re-)read chapter 1 and let me know what you think, that would be super helpful to me!

StoryMAFia

@NC1008 Yes, sorry!  I've finished the story (6 chapters) so I'm taking down all of the parts while I do editing and I'll re-publish once editing is done!  Every chapter is going to be affected while I work in continuity and foreshadowing.
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NC1008

I’d love to, did u remove the story from wattpad I can’t find it!
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BreezyMulligan

Hey looking to swap constructive criticism with like minded writers. I see you are into Brandon Sanderson like I am and thought we might have similar tastes. Let me know if you would like a critique buddy!

StoryMAFia

@BreezyMulligan Hey, I think that's a great idea!   I could use plenty of help as a beginner. Is there a piece in particular you'd like me to critique?
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