@ProtoPrince999 couldn't because some drunk douchebag crashed into the utility pole connected to my house, and now I don't have electricity at my place for a while which means I don't have access to my PC so yeah that's the main reason I haven't updated the book or any of my other books yet
@Xaster32 to be honest I used to have that problem while making my MC's, I used to make them perfect......... Nah that's a freaking lie I used to make them absolute dicks, and straight up douchebags I used to have them be openly antagonistic towards other characters for no reason at all because to me back then characters that are absolutely douchebags were easy to write but I don't do that anymore
Is always the same thing, the mc being the opposite of Ben but failing miserably because it always ends up being a fucking Mary sue/Gary stu, unable of making mistakes, having flaws and being perfect