Sereneflow

Hey hi!! I am a new writer, writing my first story. Can you please read and comment on it so that helps me gain some review. It would be a great help if you give me some insights. If you are into mystery and romance please give it a try.
          
          Aditya and Tanisha find themselves meeting again and again despite wanting nothing more than staying away from each other. Aditya is a special crime branch head chasing a crime while Tanisha is a school teacher running away from a secret.
          Circumstances lead them to meet each other for a small time forming a truce only to get seperated again.
          But this time, Aditya decides to marry her. What made him take that decision? And how is she going to react to it? 
          What happened to the case he is solving?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390516339

Aas_K23

Hello! I'm sorry for posting my story promotion on your board. I'm a new writer and would love if you could check out a snippet of my story, Blossoms of the Heart. Your feedback and support would mean the world to me. If you enjoy it, please consider voting, commenting, and recommending it to others. Thank you!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/368470570?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Aas_K23