SweeterAndBitter

If i rewrite chapter 12. I'll let y'all know. 

SweeterAndBitter

Just because not everyone writes at a 6th-grade level, doesn't mean they're using AI to write.
          
          Some people are just more advanced with their writing, and more educated with their vocabulary. 
          
          Even then, 6th graders have time to grow and better it.  Don't be a prick. 
          
          That's the point of writing, learning, and perspective. 
          
          And feedback, and i mean actual feedback.
          
          Not straight-up bullying. 
          
          Some of you are assholes. 

witchingwillowwp

@SweeterAndBitter  say it louder for the people in the back! 
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SweeterAndBitter

If you see random parts of the swan effect being posted— don't be alarmed.  That's me either fixing typos, ridding certain paragraphs or sentences, or rewriting them.
          
          I did delete the two latest chapters though.
          
          I wasn't pleased with them. 
          
          Sorry.  <3