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@WarrenChua But as far as I could tell, you use "gay" and "female" to stand for "evil". You presented no real difference between the Republic of Evil and the Free States -- both are willing to kill for their goals, both can and do wipe memories. Plus, the Republic of Evil pays better (I bet they even have universal health care, because we all know how evil that is). And just because Hoare "took advantage of the gayness" the implication remains that had America remained intolerant of gay, it would have been safe. You may not have intended to use women and gays (and foreigners -- Shang stands as the Evil Foreigner) as shorthand for evil, but intent is not magic, and that's pretty much how it reads. I was desperately hoping for a twist ending where the Republic of Evil turns out to be ... well at least the lesser of the two evils.