@SheaRyhai
Hey!!!
I'd be happy to look up your story and help out! My mom has banned me from going on this site on our main computer so unless I convince my sister to lend me her's or get my own, you'll have to wait for me to read it. For right now actually my friend is updating for me so I don't get in trouble...
I would love if you could critique and help me with my story. Thanks,
~TCM-theCoComanic