TCM-theCoComanic

@SheaRyhai thanks
          	i get my laptop now so whenever i can (which will probably be way more often) i will look up your story and comment/critique.

TCM-theCoComanic

@SheaRyhai
          Hey!!!
          I'd be happy to look up your story and help out! My mom has banned me from going on this site on our main computer so unless I convince my sister to lend me her's or get my own, you'll have to wait for me to read it. For right now actually my friend is updating for me so I don't get in trouble...
          I would love if you could critique and help me with my story. Thanks,
          ~TCM-theCoComanic

VeraAnneWolf

Hi. If your looking for a story to read I'm looking for more feed back on my story, The Entertainment. I'd be happy to read/comment on all the chapters you have up for your story The Gate if you'll do the same for mine. Just let me know :) Thanks