@TalesOfMelainaBlanc
A new scene has been added to chapter one! Someone has a secret he doesn't want aired, which just might have disastrous consequences...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/318690675-keen%27s-turn-descent-depravation
Exciting news! This moon, the revamped draft of Keen's Turn starts going up. That means you'll get to see my past few years of honing story craft in action.
It will be perhaps less dramatic for the first half-chapter, as it received more passes more recently, but I think you'll still taste the difference right away.
Open to feedback, as always.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/318690675-keen%27s-turn-descent-depravation
(And yes, the entire thing is drafted, at this point. Just need to get the beginning up to par with the end.)
Only until August 5th, you can get a copy of "Hunted Down" (a scary jungle tale inspired by my real-life adventures) along with free copies of spooky and supernatural stories by other writers of horror:
https://storyoriginapp.com/to/oh23Vfc
Line up for vampire whack-a-mole on the roof of the abandoned power station, and things just get more fun from there.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/318690675-keen%27s-turn-descent-depravation
This moon, it's off to the museum for vampire research—with an unwelcome companion.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/318690675-keen%27s-turn-descent-depravation
This moon on Keen's Turn: a nefarious proposition, a charismatic vampire, and a good old-fashioned fistfight.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/318690675-keen%27s-turn-descent-depravation
Jared prepares to take a serious fall...
Also, the suspenseful fallout of a lie, and a startling proposal.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/318690675-keen%27s-turn-descent-depravation
"It's not a bullet gun, if that's what you're thinking."
This moon, Jared puts his dangerous vampire ambush plan into action...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/318690675-keen%27s-turn-descent-depravation
While Jared works on a better vampire hunting plan, an alluring diversion... Can you spot the hidden vampire joke in this moon's chapter?
https://www.wattpad.com/story/318690675-keen%27s-turn-descent-depravation
Left in the dark again, and no way out. This moon on KEEN'S TURN, get ready to pun for your life.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/318690675-keen%27s-turn-descent-depravation