@Tamzy04 - Hey! I just finished reading "Half Past Five," and I have to say, I absolutely loved your story! I’ve never read a book where the main character, Elijah, had the courage to cut off Billy’s ignition cable like that. It really takes guts to do something like that! I enjoyed how you portrayed everything; it’s such a unique take on the plot. You follow the storyline but also add your own twist, and I really appreciate that. I can’t wait to see how the story continues! Keep up the great work!