Thepeguwone

Read both of your books in a night your a great writer 

TarotBarnes

Hi. Thank you very much; i’m glad you enjoyed them. A little Trip is still in a very rough state, and I hope to put up more when I’ve polished it some more. hearing someone else liked my stories is very nice to hear. Thanks :)
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redfae

Thanks for voting for Daisy Chain's chapter 1.  Are you going to take the #NoMoreBullying challenge?  

redfae

You only have to write 90 words. I'm using it as a prologue and looking at editing and posting an old story I wrote on bullying from different perspectives.  I'm going to look at bringing it up to date with cyber bullying.  
            
            Incase you are wondering why I'm up so early..., I can't sleep. I have a terrible cold :( 
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TarotBarnes

@redfae  Hi, Ally.
            I don't think so; I find it hard to write short stories, no matter how good the cause.
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redfae

Thank you for voting for chapters 2, 3, 4 and 5 of my novel Angel.  It's really motivating and I'm glad you are enjoying it.  I'll try and get this one finished :) xxx

redfae

 That's always good to hear :) x
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TarotBarnes

@redfae you're a good writer, you deserve praise
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redfae

I read your comments for Instinct chapter 1 & 2.  Very helpful.  
          
          I'm a bit lost what to do about Kate's (or Graces - depending on version) gun.  I think I need your help.  Ty X

TarotBarnes

Hi, Ally. I'd be happy to help but... I hope you don't think I'm a gun nut or anything; I just googled the gun and looked at what it's designed to do. That said, it doesn't hurt to try; what do you want her to be able to do with gun and/or how do you want her to use it?
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redfae

Ty for all your comments and votes on Instinct.  It will help when I come to edit it.  
          
          I start a 6 week writing course tomorrow with Curtis Brown.  I'm really nervous.  The course is about how to start a novel and includes outline and planning etc.  
          
          I can start with nothing or a project that's only started.  I thought I might do Instinct or Hunted and hoped with the course I can finally finish them.  Or, I may do a brand new novel. 
          
          What have you been up to? X

TarotBarnes

Hi, Ally,
            I'm glad you liked the comments; I hope I didn't sound too harsh, I really did like what I read (will try and finish it tonight).
            Good luck with the course; you're already a good writer so it'll help sharpen your skills :)
            I've been doing the same old thing; being a geek, though i currently have a kitten on my chest, purring an demanding my attention, which is good.
            <hugs>
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