TheCritic

Hey can you read my Draco Malfoy and Cruise of a Lifetime story?? Thanks it'd mean a lot for some criticism :)

Can you finish reading Last To Know? I'm up to chapter 18 now, and I comepletely adored your comments you made on chp. 9. they really helped me improve my writing! :D If you could catch up, I'd love it! Thanks! :D

Can you read my story's: PUNKS!, Dream, Celtic Shrine Pass and Hunted Down?

Hey there I'm going to start off with I am sorry! these are annoying and I know it becomes a bother, but I was hoping if you get a chance, if you could read the beginning of my story Violet Flame and tell me what you think about it !
          Sorry again I just have to spread the word around and unfortunately this is the only way to do that :/ I would love your honest opinion and what you think about it. I know you won't give me a fluffy answer, like amazing and blah so I would love for you to read what I have up so far
          ~ Cami 

oh, just so you know, I wasn't exactly planning to post it on wattpad. It would be harder to do most of the promoting and stuff again. And plus, I was thinking about getting it published/copyrighted!! :D 

hai. i just wanted to say thank you for taking a look at 'Change of Fate' and i can assure you that everything you said will be taken into account.
          
          thank you again. (:

Hey. I know this is a lot to ask but could you take a peek at my stories - Predestined(12 chapters in total) and arms of refuge(Only got one chapter up at the moment and is a work in progress). Would greatly appreciate it. Any comments, votes would be appreciated also. I'll return the favor ofc if you just comment on mine I'll know you read it etc. Lemme know what you'd prefer me to read in return.
          
          Thanks in advance. 
          Gina. 

Hey..erm i was just wondering if you could critic my story, it's a new one, im not sure if it will be your cup of tea, but i could use some feedback. Thanks

Thanks sooo much for checking out my story!!! Will do what you told me!!! Thanks!!!

Thank you so much for your advice on Last To Know!! It's very great to see hat someone would help me like that!! 
          
          I appreciate it dealry, and I will try to take the advice. I'm hoping I can rewrite the entire story, add things and take away things eventually.
          
          Thanks again for your help!! :D
          
          ~Rhonda