Schrodingers_box
Yoi today i read the chps again n i found one glitch idk if it's frm my side or urs...
A particular scene is repeated not like the whole but some words are repeated and the sequencing is somewhat not proper..( i read the other chp as well and I found this in some other scene too ) like there is either an abruptchange or something else .. like I'll tell u more if I understand it but yes I really think the sequencing can get better... Pls take this positively I just wanted to let yk wht i found out
Schrodingers_box
Also u aren't a bad writer...i really enjoy ur writing sm I crave for a chp like everyday but I also understand u hv life outside wp ..if it were in my hands I'd let u wrote stories forever and read them as many times
TheJwrites
@Schrodingers_box Awwie~ Ok stop. You literally took my heart after all this! (I'm literally trying to stop myself so much from smiling uncontrollably- my mum is sitting right in front of me (๑•﹏•) so...)
