hayo_girls

Hi. I'm wondering if someone could review my book called "The Society"? I would like a honest opinion and be critical if need be. Also if you would like to vote on it, that will be appreciated. Thanks.
          
          Here is the summary 
          For as long as humans have been alive a new kind of human has been forming. One that has the powers that can make one "immortal". No one has been aware of the super humans until now. When an escaped murderous criminal is loose in Anne's town. With the criminal seeking murder goes to Anne's school, Anne's life has changed forever. As Anne one of the victims, she goes to the hospital where she finds out what she is and what her father is. She finds out a whole society is filled with these supernatural beings that was suppose to be kept a secret. Can the keep the secret now with Anne's powers coming out for everyone to see?

hurricanehaps

"I stared at the horizon and as unexpected as ever, a memory was revealed to me."
          
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          With no recollection of her memory, Cassandra awakes and realises she is drowning. 
          
          Victimised, subdued, and with a twist of events, rescued, she slowly starts to get snippets from her past. 
          
          Flashbacks, and present situations overwhelm her daily life. What happened to her memories?
          
          As the story moves along, she starts to reconnect with old family members and tries to discover more about her mothers past, after she accidently visits her in the sacred Otherworld. 
          
          The ending will leave your jaw dropping. 
          
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          Undercover Lover explores the genres of supernatural, romance, mystery, and horror. 
          
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