@Firebug_3 I felt like it wasn't right, it was copying the RWBY normal storyline which is common nowadays. I want to try to write an original story, it should be out in a couple of days and the chapters will be longer and more detailed. It will follow some of the RWBY storyline, just not all of it. I will skip over some parts in the show that I think aren't as important. Plus, I was sort of writing it as I went, I am trying to be more organized and have a planner on what I want to happen in the story.