Phantom

@Izanagi39 my friend I read your book and let me be honest. You have alot to work on. Firstly try not to make too many grammar mistakes. Secondly you told me that you want to make a chapter  showing how your Oc becomes the japans friendly neighborhood Spider-Man so have him fight crimes like robbery, car chases and while you write those chapter setup a villain at the end of the chapter like Connors is great villain to start. Thirdly let the chapters be a bit more longer like 3000 words or more. All in all I like the first chapter and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

@Izanagi39 I will but right now I am busy with my college I'll read as soon as I can and reply to you.

@Izanagi39 Can read my stories first then tell me how it is and be honest and tell me how to improve.

@Izanagi39 Sorry I accidentally posted the unfinished chapter I am working on. I'll post the finished chapter once I am done. Thank you for reading my book, if you have any suggestion feel free to tell them to me on my Instagram.

@sonicthebi can you explain me what do you mean by it?

@DocJ357 so anyway what's so what kind of fanfiction do you like?

@rushipatil17948 Вот и я о том.
            
            That's what I'm talking about.

@DocJ357 fingers cross buddy

@rushipatil17948 Привет да я Неигнорирую просто Отошёл на Время.
            
            Hi, I'm Not Ignoring It, I just Went away for a While.

@DocJ357 hello dude you wanna talk?

@Goldenmoon77 best decision made

@rushipatil17948 yep. I only have four others for shippuden and that’s the harem, from backlash, I decided to remove female orochimaru for anko 

@Goldenmoon77 oh now I remember so will you add her