The_Septarium
Just a little update: I added a few new details to Chapter 4, during the conversation between Viviana and Aemond. I felt Aemond’s gaze needed a bit more intensity
I also changed Viviana’s reaction when Aemond asks about her injury (in the previous version, she avoided the question), along with a few other small additions/modifications here and there, if anyone feels like rereading the chapter :)
The_Septarium
I felt like their exchange came across as too cold, since he’s testing her and suspicious of her :)
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randomreader000000
MORE intensity!?!? Youre going to give me a heart attack…..but its Aemond so I cant stay away ;)
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