I'm jayjay and when I read books I think not only about the story been revealed to me but I also try to get a sense of the authors feelings whilst they are writing the story.

the words of a book come from dreams or past experiences, though if you look over your work and see no experiences or dreams located then don't worry, as every word is changed. its elements there to bring joy and happiness. 

if I believe their is something wrong with you book I will carefully hint to it! if you don't get the slight hint then I will come straight out. same with my books, I want honesty. even if the honesty is rude.

thank you.