tausif456
Hey, I hope you are alright. Take it easy.
tausif456
@Thegameryea34, hey I have been reading through all the chapters, and I have to say, you are quite brilliant in your writing. Can't wait for read more. I am quite curious with how you chose approach the story, I found it interesting to tell snippets of Hiroki story instead of writing his whole past? Was it personal choice you decide to right that? Sorry, if it sound to forward. I always have a love for story, just the contents themselves but the styles is presents it always have me hooked.
tausif456
@@Thegameryea34, it good practice to try going complex, but there is nothing wrong to built on simplicity. Just trying to find style before you can try to tickle the big stuff. Good luck and enjoy your day.
Thegameryea34
@tausif456 Enough said.. Absolute Cinema ✋ I very much needed that, thank you! But anyway. Yeah, i could try and make my words complex and continuous for now in future chapters. But. Something short and precise will do! :) Again, thank you and uh. Have a great day11!1!1!!!
tausif456
@Thegameyea34, writing is the most difficult part of life, really. It will take practice and experience to get better. Hell, even a skilled writer is still learning new thing. Just in due time, your writing will florish, and you will find your center ground in no time. Even if you are young, I think you have a good head to grasp what writing is soon enough. I can tell you personally, I have written many essays for assignments, instead of creating a simple words and getting to the point, I convoluted with complex words and continuous sentence that never ends.
000ALEXWOOD000
I like this story your starting with hiroki but I got I a idea can you have it where in this story at some point where hiroki ends up fighting burt that makes a bet with hiroki like if hiroki wins the fight he gives kaida ,kanoko and ayuma back to hiroki
000ALEXWOOD000
Ok but can you could you have like maby where ayuma regrets what she did and comes searching for hiroki for forgiveness