@TheronStoat I’m loving your Michael Myers x Hazbin Hotel crossover fic, it’s incredible. Michael Myers the very embodiment of evil itself in Hazbin Hotel’s version of hell? Awesome! Though I do have one critique, the Michael Myers from Halloween 2018-Ends (the one in your fic) doesn’t have a voice/demon that dictates his actions (that’s only in the curse of thorn timeline where Michael is cursed by an ancient cult which results in him being possess by a demon) in the current timeline (2018-Ends) Michael is completely aware of/in control of his actions and deliberately chooses to cause as much pain, death, and destruction as he can (he’s pure evil, the very personification of evil) so I think you should remove the voice in Michael’s head as it doesn’t align with the current timeline (you don’t have to redo the first 2 chapters, just drop the voice from here on out) but despite the very very minor flaw I’m loving this fox and can’t wait for our cast to meet Michael (also, when can we expect chapter 3?)
