Tiffany White

final hour is cool

Hi! Mind checking out my book; 'The Clock's Chain'? Need some feedbacks on it and please comment your honest opinion :)) 

Thanks for the follow darling. Much appreciated. :)

@MiltonMarmalade 
          
          But I appreciate your feedback! Thank you :) 

@MiltonMarmalade 
          
          Thank you, but most books are set out like this. You introduce the characters and then slowly ease into the more intense part. 

Thanks for the follow Tiffany. Advice: jump straight into the real story and fill in background later.

Reviews are appreciated!