TikiFrenzy

Chapter 17 has been published!!

TikiFrenzy

Hello all!! The next two chapters may take a bit longer to be uploaded. They are a little longer and the first real climax of The Outcasts Freakshow.
          While my book is mostly finished on Google Docs (just needs editing) I am entirely rewriting this section from scratch to include the actual Outcasts Performance rather than just a silly montage like I initially had. 
          
          I don’t have an exact publish-date for these chapters yet, but it is about half-way done. 
          
          Following chapters should be posted just as consistently as my prior ones.
          
          Once these two chapters come out, grab your tissues be prepared!! It will change everything for the Coins. 

Galescountryhuman

Hey i noticed you voted on "pumpkin vanilla spice latte"  (currently working on the next part) ¿Any feedback, complains, compliments?

TikiFrenzy

Hii!! The main feedback I have would mostly just to keep an eye on capitalization! Names especially :)
            I think you’re really good at setting tone and making the scenes easy to imagine. Keep up the amazing work!! I love Pony OC stories. 
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