Timothy441

Hey everyone! With Apple’s announcement of their new product, the Apple Vision Pro, I have a great short story to recommend: The Despair and Dismay of Daphne Parfait. It’s my short story about a girl who lives in a world where everyone wears a headset much like what Apple unveiled, and so they all live most of their waking hours in an augmented or virtual reality. She despises her world and she feels trapped in her life until something, or someone, makes her view it all a bit differently. 
          	
          	It’s a great little sci fi piece with some interesting romance tied in. It also connects with The Epitomes, as readers of that story have seen. I also plan on writing more to Daphne’s story, continuing in the short story format, once I have completed book one of The Epitomes (which is almost done).
          	
          	Anyways, sorry for the plug for my own writing there, but I’d be curious to get your thoughts on the story! Give it a read, and feel free to comment and vote! Thanks all!

Timothy441

Hey everyone! With Apple’s announcement of their new product, the Apple Vision Pro, I have a great short story to recommend: The Despair and Dismay of Daphne Parfait. It’s my short story about a girl who lives in a world where everyone wears a headset much like what Apple unveiled, and so they all live most of their waking hours in an augmented or virtual reality. She despises her world and she feels trapped in her life until something, or someone, makes her view it all a bit differently. 
          
          It’s a great little sci fi piece with some interesting romance tied in. It also connects with The Epitomes, as readers of that story have seen. I also plan on writing more to Daphne’s story, continuing in the short story format, once I have completed book one of The Epitomes (which is almost done).
          
          Anyways, sorry for the plug for my own writing there, but I’d be curious to get your thoughts on the story! Give it a read, and feel free to comment and vote! Thanks all!

Timothy441

A new chapter titled "The Return of the Demon" has just been added to the Epitomes! Luca is back to narrating, and tells us what happened after Simon told him his story. Let me know your thoughts in the comments, and please vote if you like it!

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Hiii!How are you?I hope fine!
          I'm sorry for bothering you, but do you have time to check out my stories? 
          my biggest dream is to become a great author one day!
          If you are interested, here it is.
          
          
          
          I follow back too for help you because I know it's not easy to be a writer ;)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/328523548?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_IKnowEnglish_&wp_originator=pWCJmQ%2B3QjtyjxeeB4Rzrhg1Nycidk699DwUiOF3aMKbcfZlPxwhlPYlJxtSCMR5WNHV%2BahDnGBr8Tnt8WEgRq%2FstUUcTnj5KbYjuq8ixRA9FkWLpf%2BX%2B%2Bc9HrcCqxFP

Timothy441

@Solleyl hello! I haven’t forgotten about your story, I’ve just had a lot going on. Hopefully I’ll get to it soon! Feel free to give either of my stories a read if you’d like. Have a great day :)
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Timothy441

Hello, I’m well, I hope you are too! Sure, I’ll check out your stories. I’d love it if you could check out mine too! We can swap thoughts and comments. Thank you! 
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Timothy441

Alright everyone: I just posted not one, not two, but THREE new exciting chapters in The Epitomes. Give them a read, a vote if you like them, and let others know your thoughts in the comments! Hint: Simon's story is not yet over.

Timothy441

Thank you so much to @beetlemaniacawards (and @beetlemaniac) for reading the first chapter of The Despair and Dismay of Daphne Parfait, and ranking it second place in the Best Character Introduction awards! I am very grateful for the recognition. Daphne would be so happy to know that she is understood :) 
          
          Congrats to S. Wolff ( @bellofsilence ) for winning first place! 
          
          Check out the full results here: https://www.wattpad.com/1336522874-competitions-a-collection-of-awards-best-character

BellOfSilence

@Timothy441 Thank you very much <3 Big Congrats to you too, for the 2nd place! <3 Well deserved!
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Timothy441

Thanks for clarifying -- thank you @SarahQuinnMcGrath for the review and the acknowledgment!
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