TinyAssassin01

So this weeks been a joy ride. Want to let you guys know I will be delayed in a few of my tasks as I have had a few issues arise that weren’t foreseen. Messing up my rotator cuff and having a gas leak in my home to name a few, and Ofcourse the new change in jobs. I will be working diligently through the weekend to catch up.

KananFire

Hi, i was wondering if Celestine was on hiatus again since I haven’t gotten on any new rotation this month. I hope things are alright.

TinyAssassin01

Ahhh I’m so sorry! I posted a notice on the batch 1 group but forgot batch 2 I’m sooo sorry!! Yes! We’re on a short hiatus but this weekend I’ll be catching up everything so that we can return strong in May. A few of the managers had finals and I accidentally sprained both my ankles lol so I’ll be working hard to get us back in action soon! I’ll be sure to contact you as soon as it does please forgive me
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KananFire

Hey, I was wondering if there was a way to stick to the same partners for multiple rotations in the book club. I understand if that’s not how the club operates but it would be nice to get similar eyes on multiple of my chapters. Thanks for your time :) I am really enjoying the book club so far

ArmyMZ

@ TinyAssassin01  I love your book Lake of Fire. I have a few editions on my page. If you like it, leave stars ⭐. Thanks in advance ❤️
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TinyAssassin01

@KananFire absolutely. I’ll put a note on the system for when I make the next batch so you’ll have permanent partners until you give me further notice
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KananFire

Hey sorry for the late notice but both @FCClements and @AnemoneMarino were interested in doing a long term pairing with me for Celestine so we can all get consistent eyes on more of our work. Idk if it’s possible for the next rotation but I’d love to do it moving forward
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dazzlingdreamssss

hiii
          r4r?

dazzlingdreamssss

@TinyAssassin01 yeah sure i would love to join in
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TinyAssassin01

Hi! I’m sorry. I don’t do r4r’s anymore due to time restraints. It’s been a very busy and difficult time. If you are interested though, I’m a manager of a book club and I could help you look into being a member. It’s very similar to r4r where a group of writers reads each others works and gives comments on it weekly. If you are looking to improve and want someone to bounce ideas with, I highly recommend this group
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Mjthe112222aaaa

Thank you for your wonderful feedback on My Little Braveheart! And thank you for not making me insecure. That book was my first time writing historical fiction, but kudos to you for being extremely nice!

Mjthe112222aaaa

@Mjthe112222aaaa thanks! Please check out Echos of the Bloody! It's my latest project!
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TinyAssassin01

@Mjthe112222aaaa While you did have grammar issues, it wasn't bad enough that I couldn't follow along with the story. You have great substance. The tweaks you'd need to make would greatly grow the quality of the story. Authors that are willing to accept the criticism and recognize it comes from a place of love is the best. You may be surprised to hear but plenty of people join contests then become upset with judges for judging. If you are willing and accepting, you can truly grow. I don't expect anyone to love my works. But when people give me their opinions or catch my mistakes, i appreciate it. If I ever publish, I'll be able to thank people that took their time to really help me grow. You have that same accepting and understanding so I know your work is going to grow <3
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Mjthe112222aaaa

@Mjthe112222aaaa, thank you! Cause I've had some judges not read most of the book and then hound me on grammar and how I either have too much of it or none at all. I love judges like you!
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TinyAssassin01

So this weeks been a joy ride. Want to let you guys know I will be delayed in a few of my tasks as I have had a few issues arise that weren’t foreseen. Messing up my rotator cuff and having a gas leak in my home to name a few, and Ofcourse the new change in jobs. I will be working diligently through the weekend to catch up.

Zenderfall

Just read four chapters of Lake of Fire as an assignment in a book club.  Really well written!  The only thing that gets me is the POV—is it omniscient?  Not that it’s bad, I just was guessing because there’s a bit of jumping from one person to another mid scene. Anyway, it’s really great!  I read more than the assigned chapters!

Zenderfall

@TinyAssassin01 thanks a lot!  And I wish you great success in your stories!
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TinyAssassin01

@Zenderfall I appreciate your feedback. Good criticism helps us grow so I am always looking to improve. With you joining the club, I'm excited to see you enjoy that aspect of it. It's a great community. I appreciate you fixing the comments and I've let our fearless leader know she can add you on the next rotation. Great work!
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Zenderfall

Should be six comments now—thanks for letting me know!
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StormyQuill

Hi. I want to apologize for not reading your book in the longest time since we were doing r4r. I got so busy with life and I didn't have the time to do so. I promise I'm starting again and will not abandon the book <3

TinyAssassin01

Ah don’t even worry about it <3 it’s been very busy for all of us and I have been on an off and on. Again hiatus trying to catch up on my work. I know you’re dealing with a lot too. I’ve had to take my time and cut off other r4rs just because of the circumstances. Yours is the only one I’ve kept since I plan on finishing but please don’t worry. Life happens sometimes and it sucks but we’re all just doing our best  take whatever time you need
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