@Turkishdra19771
Why are you stop writing scenes ?
@ Ewaczen I've been thinking about this ever since I told you I was taking a break. It's been 3 days and believe me, I didn't feel good about the decision I made That's why you're the first one here to know that I'm starting to write again. My personal problems shouldn't have affected your too! I'm sorry! I'm back!❤️
The story is gone
@dontmindy it's okay, just don't think about the bad part now.You can regain the votes.What matters is that you have saved the part Everything will go back as it is in a matter of time.Just don't give up And I will always be their supporting you
@ dontmindy Now I saw it too The good part is that I can republish it because I have the chapters saved on my laptop. The bad part is that I'll lose all the votes.
بدنا ترجمة باللغة العربية اذا ممكن
Regarding the rewrite of the fateful dinner episode, I've come up with some ideas, and you can see if you'll consider them. It could be a way where Halil already knew what the snake was planning about the pregnancy and knew it was actually Kaan's, but the others didn't know. When she tells Zeynep, she's shocked because she intended to reveal that she was also pregnant, but then she gets sad and angry. This part happens exactly as in the episode; she leaves the restaurant angry, but Halil doesn't let her go alone and ends up taking her to the mountain house where they have a passionate night. In the morning, he tells her about the snake's lie, and she ends up revealing her pregnancy. You could also add parts where they tell everyone, without judging him before he reveals everything. It would be really good.
I wanted you to write about them at the fateful dinner that the snake revealed the pregnancy but in your version she would not exist and we would see Zeynep starting to have all the pregnancy symptoms, she could even fit one of their nights after dinner and the next day she continues to get sick and the girls wondering and make her do a test and in the end they find out
@ TKhatakebb For that I'll have to make a separate part. But I promise you that after I finish writing the part from episode 55, I'll also write the one you want
Nice story
