Uhhnothankstho

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my new dystopian book World Left in Pieces. It’s my very first book and I want to improve. Comments and votes and shares would be appreciated. I’m looking for someone that could give me constructive criticism. Thank you so much for your time. 
          
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I left this account a year ago, and now I'm back. Probably will begin writing again and hopefully trying to Improve. I came back to 99+ notifications so, I guess y'all still alive 

Moving 'not quite my forte' and 'the black death of the apocalypse' to my alt! Have a good day/night :)

I've made an alt account, it's called Horror_cave. If you want to follow it you can. It'll be a new start and I'll probably be there more then here, so check it out if you like. =]

hi thanku so much for the comments in my book!! i love reading them its so funny  

Ok so people, "Dawn doesn't always last." Will be half the length of, "We meet at dawn". Just wanted to let y'all know! :)

Chapter 12 has been publicized.

Yesterday I found your book and went to your account. I knew I saw you somewhere and now I know that I recognize you because you replied to my comment