@JeddieJay Jayme, my man, I f**ks with you sooooo hard! Your writing is just AMAZEBALLS. I mean, I just...I can't even. When I saw you were doing book reviews, I thought, "why not throw my hat in the ring?". I got school girl happy when I saw your comment! I'm so glad you liked my first chapter (I encourage you to read more *hint hint wink wink*) and I know I have like a ton of work to do with this little short story of mine. It's my first story and knowing you liked it has been very encouraging. I'm going to school in a about, oh, give or take...three days for creative writing. Hopefully there I'll make this story even more awesome sauce! Thanks again Jayme! You just keep doing what your doing. I'll be looking for your updates!