hello. i am a dude of unspecified age here to give you my opinions on your OCs
- no longer taking oc submissions
- wattpad got hacked y'all should check Have I Been Pwned to see if you got hacked
- yes you can submit an oc
- yes you can submit more than one oc
- yes you can ask me to edit chapters if you submitted wrong information or left information out
- yes you can re-submit if you've edited your oc since/because of your chapter! i can either edit the current chapter or add an extra part
- i am only accepting ocs submitted to my inbox, and ocs in the comments or on my wall will not be accepted
- i don't comment on stories unprompted any more, so if you find my comments on someone else's story from 2016, i am a different person now
- i don't reply to your comments unless they're questions but i have read Every Single One
- if i miss a very obvious detail/am questioning your sources for a thing that 100% happened in canon/try to school you on something you specialize in, tell me! it doesn't help either of us if i give you wrong and bad advice
- don't apologize for sending too much information! most people need 7-8 messages to send all of theirs!
- yes you can message me direct questions i haven't answered here
- the first few chapters of each book are pretty terrible i agree
- no i don't remember making that comment on your book
- i'm frustrated i take a month to update too
- yes i know 'critique' is a pretentious word i picked it because i think it sounds fun
- [redacted] window [redacted] next to [redacted] three hundred meters from [illegibly burned] so [ripped and thrown in the ocean]
- JoinedJune 11, 2015
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