Uzma_Farheen

Dear Readers,
          	
          	I’m excited to let you know that I’ve proofread the story "Ek Din", ensuring it’s polished and ready for you to experience once again with enhanced enjoyment. Feel free to check it out and share your thoughts. Your feedback is greatly appreciated!
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/93854961

Iluvipkknd

“ The Involuted Fate “ is so beautiful.. I loved how you started.. especially the intro and then progression of Raizada’s meeting Khushi.. 
          Looks like Shyam is same as in original serial, a scum bag.. let’s see if Khushi is Arnav’s new PA.. if Khushi’s accident was Devi Maiyya’s way of saving Khushi from her foster family and/or Shyam …please do continue