VERYRAREMEMBERSONLY1

Anyone wanna proof read a chapter of my story like tell me how u feel abt the plot and the characters and how u feel abt the story and what I should fix?
          If so tell me and I’ll send it to you.

Just updated my story called: Her sister 

Currently writing a chapter for my book called her sister 

Hey y’all I was just wondering if I should continue my book manipulative comment ur thoughts abt it?

Thank you for adding my story to your reading list!

How do you guys feel about my book slipknot and do you think i should have longer chapters don’t be scared to comment