The plot was kinda good, but the writing style was a little wrong.The character development was also out of the blue and there was an excess of exclamation marks Honestly the story could have a nicer progress to it if some things are fixed coz those things kinda make the story shine less even if it was meant for hot blooded teenagers but over all good work author
Also next time if anyone wants to give me any cristism feel free but only if you can help me fix it or else it is just u not liking the story and should just skip it. It is my first time getting like this kind of cristism respectful ofc but still no help was there for me to actually become better. So keep that in mind as well thank you.
Are you not writing the "omegaverse" novel anymore ?
It's was really good , I wish I could read more , but I am not pressuring you,I only want to know whether you will continue it or not...
YYour story was good
GUYS! finally my exams are overrrrr!!!! I did okay I think and I am hoping to get the best results! Please wish me luck! Anyway I will start updating in one or two days no worries!!~
Omg...I got 20.000 readings is what I should say???? My story finally reached that high?! Oh my God! I am so happy and proud! I am currently going through a tough period because of exams but this helped me a lot!! THANK YOU A LOT EVERYONE WHO READS MY STORIES!! (゚ο゚人))(ノ゚0゚)ノ~⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾
Guys my exams will be in almost a month so i am planning to post another chapter after I am done with them! Hope you understand! But I may update one or two we will see :))) Good luck at your exams too if you have!(^∇^)ノ♪
╰┈➤YOU RECEVEID A NEW MESSAGE⋆·˚ ༘
[from Ayato’s wife!!]
❝hey darling˚ ༘✶
tysm for following me (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)♡
please make sure to stay healthy by eating and drinking as well as take care of yourself and remember that you’re beautiful the way are love❞
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˚ ༘ * *ੈ✩‧₊˚you’re always welcome˚ ༘ * *ੈ✩‧
˗ˏ✎From: Love❤️*ೃ˚ ͙˚ ༘
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@ ReplyToMycomment Oh my ahahah ! Thank you so much for this message! You also take care of yourself and I like the vibe ? I should say? From this message! It is very nicely decorated! I am sure you have a very nice aesthetic! Again thank you and please keep yourself healthy and never give up! Treasure yourself cuz if u do that you will suprised at how much u got~ Okay enough with all that! Have a nice day!!! ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ(^∇^)ノ♪
I meant 10K readings in my one story if u didn't get what i meant.Oh! No problems I can give you my Instagram if you wish to follow me there XD. We can also try Chatting if you don't mind :)